Friday, January 20, 2012

The Whole Point

So the whole point of my paper is this...

My claim is that public marriage proposals are simply not okay.

The reasons for this claim are:
it crushes your fiance's dreams of the perfect proposal
it can hurt you both
it's embarrassing
it involves way too much pressure
it leads to a greater chance at receiving no for an answer

With these reasons I assume that:
you value your fiance's dreams and feelings
you don't want to be hurt or hurt her
you don't want to be embarrassed
you don't like being put under pressure
you don't want to take no for an answer

Boys, don't let this be you!


  1. The thing is, some girls love being the center of attention and would love to be proposed to in the public!

  2. Yes! You Tube videos... always make the post automatically more interesting. This is going to be a great paper and I can't wait to read it.

  3. Thanks Seth! I'm glad. Michelle I guess my comment never went up, but that's a great point. I guess where I'm trying to go with this is most girls would rather the occasion be more intimate.